Simply Irresitable

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Dana Brooks
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Simply Irresitable

Post by Dana Brooks » Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:11 pm

Carry on our love
Dont ever lose sight
The beauty that love brings
Magic that we share

We will talk all through the night
Tell each other our deepest secrets
Hold on to every word
With that special look in our eyes

Begin to touch, not let go
Light the fire inside
Feel the flames we've created
Our desire we cant hide

Our imagination runs wild
Love takes over
It's hard to hold back
Our love is simply irresitable

(c) Dana Brooks...1-01

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Post by bradmurphyackermanms » Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:21 pm

Another smashing poem, young lady!!
My, you are just bursting with all of these goodies!!!

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Post by Dana Brooks » Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:40 pm

glad you enjoyed...I wrote this several years back... :lol:

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Post by bradmurphyackermanms » Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:51 pm

Dana, You need to compile all your poems into a book!!
You'd make a killing!! All your poems are so heartfelt!

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Post by Dana Brooks » Sun Jun 18, 2006 2:36 pm

Brad thank you sooo much...I am always delighted that you enjoy my poems...it means a great deal to me that you stop by and read them... :lol: :D

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Post by Marlys » Tue Jun 20, 2006 10:36 am

Love is in the air! I liked it!
BE TRUE TO YOURSELF!
Life is too short for drama & petty things, so kiss slowly, laugh insanely, Love truly and forgive quickly.

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Post by Dana Brooks » Wed Jun 21, 2006 1:55 pm

thank you Marlys....glad you liked this one... :lol:

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Simply Irresitable

Post by LadyBlue » Wed Jun 21, 2006 3:10 pm

Well, I enjoy your work tremendously and this one is no exception. I am in awe of your poetic talent. Great work, Dana.

Rita
"The Stars Declare the Glory of God; The Heavens Proclaim Their Builder's Craft.
Psalms 19:1"

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Post by Dana Brooks » Wed Jun 21, 2006 4:04 pm

wow thanks for that wonderful comment Rita!!! I am delighted that you enjoy my poetry!!! You are a awesome poetess yourself... :lol: ...have a blessed afternoon!!!

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Nice One,Dana'

Post by Shirley Shaw » Wed Jun 21, 2006 5:10 pm

I'm sorry I didn't see this one,sooner. It is truly 'lovely',but ,everyone that I've seen so far,of yours' are! Very beautiful,and 'romanticly-inspiring',too! :wink: 8) "Love it'....Love,Shirley shaw-raytown,mo.64133............."God Bless You,Always'...... :D :lol:

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Post by Dana Brooks » Wed Jun 21, 2006 6:49 pm

awww Shirley you are so sweet!!! thank you so much for taking the time to read my poems...I really, really enjoy your's also...have a wondeful evening friend... :lol: :D :lol:

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Post by imfallingleaf » Fri Jun 23, 2006 7:53 pm

Another wonderfully written love poem! You write so well!

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Post by Dana Brooks » Fri Jun 23, 2006 7:56 pm

thanks to you once again Falling Leaf!!! you are such a sweet friend!!! :lol:

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