------I STILL HAVE YOU ON MY MIND-----

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Miss Caroline
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------I STILL HAVE YOU ON MY MIND-----

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I heard the whisper of the trees
And a tear slipped from my eye
For your voice came into my heart,
Why did I start to cry?

I felt the touch of raindrops splash
So soft upon my skin
Remembering the glorious day
That my heart had let you in.

Time has passed for many years
Each second seems so long
And now each time I think of you
I hear our loving song.

I think about the whispered words
And with each thought I find
Although the years have passed away
I still have you on my mind.


Author: Carolyn Ford Witt
8-23-2009
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AWESOME WRITING HERE CAROLINE
KEEP'EM COMING
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That is an everlasting love you have Caroline and you have penned it perfectly well for us all to enjoy. Thank you very much.... I love it! God bless you!!!
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Caroline,
This is so good and so touching, We never forget those special Loves that we have in our lives, The memories just seem to always linger,

God Bless You Eva
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Absolutely Beautiful, written by a true master, superb Miss Carol!!!
God Bless You!!!
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I couldn't agree with you more Jeff. Miss Carol, we miss you! It's been so long since you have graced us with your poetry. I have made this poem into an e-card:

http://nethugs.com/love/i-still-have-you-on-my-mind/

Thank you Jeff for digging this masterpiece up!
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Thank you so much, I appreciate that the younger generation still like my poetry.
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So glad to see you posting again Carol. Generation young or old, we all enjoy your beautiful work. You have a way to make the words touch the heart. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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This honor is really funny because Steve gave me the one line "I still have you on my mind" to work with. The poem just grew off of it. Just a hint to others, Challenge each other with one line and let your talent do the rest. There are times that I feel like I am talking in rhyme. I just can't remember them long enough to write them down now.

Love you all!
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Well, you did good my dearest friend, and had you have just few more verses, this would have also been a video. Actually, I got the title from a Conway Twitty song, "I Just Had You On My Mind." Love every word of this awesome write, and well deserving of an E-card, love that also. Let's your poem and his creativity, WOW, indeed a great Ecard. And to you my friend, here's another one liner. You do your thing and I'll do mine. Let's see what we each come up with (but give me a few days) "Inside Your Heart."God bless.
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Ever since you put this post up, I've tried to remember what this phrase meant to me.....then it came to me and I went back to look. In 2008 I wrote "Within my Heart", a christian poem about God's love.
Sorry, I can't write 2 of them.
Give me another line!
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