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Janice Kennedy
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Post by Janice Kennedy » Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:14 pm

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~+~You Love Me~+~



At the start of the day
You love me


At the end of the way
You love me


It makes me happy to know
You love me


That wherever I go
You love me


Whether I am good or bad
You love me


Whether I am happy or sad
You love me


All of the time, not some of the time
You love me


Your love is sublime
You love me




Joyful Jan
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Post by Sir Daniel » Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:02 am

Hi Joyful Jan,

This is the sort of poem that works on so many levels, it is perfect for children as it is short enough to keep them interested, rhymes easy to make it something they can say and pretty enough to impress their parents. It works on a spirtual level as a personal message to God, it also works on a personal level as an oath to the person in your life whom you have found that makes your days brighter and nights sweeter.

Really nice my friend, keep writing.

~ Daniel

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Post by Linner » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:27 am

Gosh, Daniel sure does give a good post, doesn't he ?? Even those are like poetry !! LOL !! I do agree with him, though, Jan. This sweet poem is almost like a litany...one could say this over and over again in the mind as a faith booster !! I like it a whole lot and you have exactly what Daniel says you have !! Good one, girl !!

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Post by Helen Herliana » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:06 am

This poem is very sweet.... sweeter than sugar! And easy to remember too. Good for Sunday school children.Thanks for sharing it with us all.... God bless you!!!!

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Post by Hope » Thu Aug 20, 2009 8:33 am

Jan,
I have to say I love this and it really Blessed me today just knowing no matter what He loves me, I also agree with what everyone else said it can be a blessing to so many, when I frist read it though I thought of how much He loves us and that means everything to me,

God Bless You
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Post by Happy Holmes1 » Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:27 am

What a beauty this is Janelope! I absolute love it! And wasn't that great what Daniel said, for this truly would be a sweet love poem from a child to his parent............Oh wait, it is! Aww, from Jan to her Daddy GOD, how sweet and darling this is and you are!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :) )))((( -HappyD
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Post by Brenda Pike » Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:48 am

JAN, LOVE YOUR POEM AND IT IS A POEM ANYBODY COULD HOLD IN THEIR HEART FOR INSPIRATION. AND YES, TAKE TO SUNDAY SCHOOL FOR THE CHLLDEN TO LEARN WOULD BE MARVELIOUS. THANKS FOR SHARING SUCH A SIMPLY BUT TRUE MESSAGE TO ALL OF US. LOVE BRENDA

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Post by Indigo Blue » Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:24 pm

Oh Janice this is such a beautiful poem!!! Love it soooo much and love you to
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Post by mystery » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:08 pm

Jan this is so beautiful, it could be used in Sunday schools everywhere, a little prayer for the children and grown ups too ... uplifting and a joy to read, so lovely, Mystery xxxxx

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Post by imfallingleaf » Sat Aug 22, 2009 11:19 am

Jan, honey this is nothing less than I have come to expect from such a loving, precious heart as yours. You've been my friend for a long time now, and I love you and intend to keep you for many more years too! This poem is a reflection of your inner self Jan, and it's so beautiful, so is the poem. Thank you Jan for writing this awesome piece of art and sharing it with us all. But most of all, thank you for your gift of friendship, I will always treasure it. I love you sweet friend, always stay just as you are.

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Post by ImSaved2 » Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:41 pm

This is just so precious!!! Nothing can separate us from the love of God, because He does love me!!! Outstanding!!! You keep getting better and better as you grow as a writer!!!
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