OUR VALENTINES CHALLENGE HAS BEGUN

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OUR VALENTINES CHALLENGE HAS BEGUN

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Remember, at the end of our Halloween challenge, I promised you a Valentines Challenge? Well, here it is. So, start writing and posting now.
Remember, our challenges are for fun,
so hurry up,
and let's have some.

Make them short, make them long,
make them a song.
Make them sad or make them sweet,
make them sweep me off my feet.
Try to make them rhyme,
just get them in before Valentines.


Here is one to get us started off.





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~MY VALENTINE BROUGHT TO ME~




He brought to me a rose so fair
For me to fasten in my hair

He brought to me chocolate
So smooth, creamy and rare

~My Valentine Promised Me~Image

Love that was true and would last
Until all eternity had passed

He promised to always be true
And, never make me feel blue

~My Valentine Said, To Me~Image

His lady so beautiful and fair
For me he would forever care

He, said I am his one true love
That I am his cute turtle dove

~My Valentine Sang To Me~Image

A song so full of love and romance
A song that made my heart just dance

A song of love so real and true
That thrilled my heart thru and thru

~My Valentine Gave To Me~Image

He gave to me a kiss tender and sweet
He completely swept me off my feet

He gave to me a beautiful ring
That made my heart really sing




(C) Joyful Jan
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"AMBASSADOR OF LOVE."
(Poetic Lyrics)



In the mith of the night,
Let me hold you one more time!!
So, you´ll feel my love for you.
I know, I´ll never leave you.
We´ll be together, I promise...
´Til the end of times.

Refrain:
Look up at the moon above,
A round platform of love,
A shining stage filled with light,
Where we´ll dance among the stars.
Squeeze me darling, with all your might!!
I´m your Ambassador of Love.

Let us be in paradise, just you and I!!
Let me love you one more time!!
So, you´ll feel all my love for you.
Your magic touch will take me to dreamland,
To a quiet island with clear blue waters,
Palm trees and white sand.
You take me to the mood of loving you.

Let me hold you in my arms!!
I´ll protect you from all harms.
I´ll take you to Heaven´s shores,
For each day, I love you more.
It´s the only way to truly love,
And treat your sweetheart in a loving way.

You´re all the vitamins I need,
You´ve showed me the way to live.
You are the honey of all flowers,
The soft serenade of nightingales.
You´ve made my life a rainbow´s showers.
You´ve turned it all into the Eden´s Garden of Love.



Author: MONICA BERTRAND. (Poetic Lyrics written by 11-16-2006)
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Thank you, very much, dear Monica, for entering our
Valentines Challenge. And such a lovely, love poem, you have entered.
Thank you, so much. Feel free to post as many as you would like.

Love and Blessings Joyful Jan :D :D :D
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This is Norman's poem, he ask me to move it here.



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Redneck Valentine


Now hunny ya knows I luvs ya
So much it might be a crime
But, I wanted to write these words
For ya a redneck Valetines

My buddies tell me cupid
Done shot me with his bow
They claim he hit me in the butt
but, heck i don't realy know

They say I went plum loco
When I first layed eyes on you
They said, with your big ol nose and buck teeth
I'm just a love sick crazy fool

But hunny I don't see that
All I see is my beauty queen
No matter how grouchy you git
Or say things that are so mean

I luv ya hunny with my heart
I thought I'd let ya know
Though some claim I'm deformed
And my brain is down in my big toe

Now hunny I hope ya like my card
That I'm sendin straight to you
And please don't be mad and angry
At your love sick crazy fool

Just come runnin to give me a hug
Then tip it off with a kiss or two
And to heck with everyone else
We'll go off, and start our own redneck gene pool







wrote 1/28/2009 by Norman Hale Jr.
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Thanks, Normal, for joining in the challenge, we were
needing somthing funny, to go with our serious. LHMO


Love and Blessings Jolly Joyful Jan :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :roll: :roll: :roll:
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A more serious side of Norman.



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Would You Be My Valentine?


Would you cross your heart?
Or, would you cross your fingers?
Would you forever be my Valentine?
As long as our love still lingers

Would you tell me you love me?
Would you seal it with a kiss?
Now, could you do that one more time?
In case there was something I missed?

Would you accept my card,
That I selected just for you?
Just a sign of my love!
I pray that you like it too!

Would you bring on that smile?
That lights up your precious face
And those star sparkling eyes
Are just reflections sent from Grace

Would you be my Valentine?
Could we share our loves?
Am I fealing the butterflies?
Or it is it beating from love doves?

PLEASE SAY YOU'LL BE MY VALENTINE




wrote 1/27/2009 by Norman Hale Jr

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Thanks for another really great poem, Norman.
You're on a roll there, man. Keep'em comin'.


Love and Blessings Joyful Jan :D
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You sure know how to make things sweet Norman. I hope you like this ecard:

http://ecards.nethugs.com/wouldvalentine2.shtml

Thank you for sharing and participating in the Valentine's Day challenge.
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Unwanted Valentine
By
Roger Turner

Oh Lady Sweet, thou art the one,
Who does bewitch my aching heart.
Enchanted by your loving smile,
I’m here so close, yet we’re far apart.

Would it be so that a sign you’d give,
To beckon me right to your side.
And then to share with me one glance?
Perchance your feeling you would not hide?

For Lady Sweet, of you I dream,
Each and every lonely night,
And in my thoughts you do remain,
Throughout the solitary hours of daylight.

For I have fallen for your smile,
Your glistening eyes, your womanly charms.
Oh what would I give just to spend,
One moment in your loving arms.

Oh Lady Sweet, do I exist,
Within that busy heart of thine?
Or am I destined, just to be,
Your unwanted Valentine.
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Really fantastic, job there, Roger. A little sad. But so very well written. And, I did ask for sad, too. I think now all we need is a song or two, to complete the list. Come on everybody else, we are all, getting ahead of you, get those pens to moving.

Love and Blessings Joyful Jolly Jan :D :D :D


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Norman, great job there man. Just keep'em comin' like this one. A mighty fine poem.

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A fabulous e-card there Skip, none better.

Love and Blessings Joyous Jan :D :D :D



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THANK YOU, DEAR SWEET FRIEND JANICE, FOR SHOWING YOUR GREAT MORAL SUPPORT AND LOVING FRIENDSHIP TO ALL OF US AT NET HUGS!! WE ALL LOVE YOU SO MUCH, MY DEAR FRIEND, JANICE!!
I SHALL POST SOME MORE POETIC LYRICS THAT I HAVE WRITTEN IN THE PAST...
I DO HOPE THAT ONE DAY SOMEONE MAY GRANT ME A WONDERFUL ECARD. THAT IS MY WISH...
GOD BLESS YOU IN EVERY SINGLE WAY!!
HUGS AND LOVE IN CHRIST,
MONICA BERTRAND. :D :D
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Thank you, dear sweet Monica, for all of your kind words, and for your continued support of Nethugs. We all appreciate and love you so much.

Love and Blessings Joyful Jan ))(( :D :D :D )))(((
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~LIKE TWO STARS~


On a starry night of midnight blue,
You loved me with a heart, so true.


First, you delicately, nibbled on my ear,
As you held me so tenderly near.


Your fingers flowing down my spine,
My whole body felt so divine.


Tantalizing me with your finger tips,
As you tauntingly kissed my waiting lips.


The night exploded into a million stars,
As, we went shooting up to Mars.


We were like two stars colliding in space,
Then we floated down to a gentler place.



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Come right here
And wrap your arms around me
Tell me how you'll love me
Through all eternity

Come right here
Press your lips to mine
show me how your love is
Mine until the end of time

Come right here
Even when I'm old and grey
Tell me that you'll love me
For I feel the exact same way

Come right here
And tell me that it's so
That you will always love me
And will never let me go

Come right here
And tell me you love me true
It might come as a surprise,but

I TRUELY DO LOVE YOU





wrote 1/31/2009 by Norman Hale Jr.
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