Official Song/poem writing thread

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BROKEN,busted, thrown aside
Too LATE now to mend it,
This is my FINAL STATEMENT
GOODBYE MY LOVE 'tis ended.

I am not good at FAKING
Seems I'm LESS THAN PERFECT to,
INCOMPATIBLE, surely not
Do I seem tlike that to you.

YOU"RE STILL IN MY HEART, my dearest one
And WISHES are what I am making
I'm not JUST A TOY you can throw away
I've been giving, YOU'VE BEEN TAKING.

WHAT'S WRONG with you ANGEL OF MINE
You must NEVER GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS,
I am THE ONE you LOVED BUT NOT LOVED
My love is TIMELESS LOVE, it seems.

Just having a bit of fun. Marigold.
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Please can someone help. I posted a bit of poetry for fun on the poem writing thread this afternoon, but I can not find it. Must have done something wrong. Can anyone help. Marigold.
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More than likely you didn't save it or submit it. That's the only way you could have lost it. If you type your poetry on a word document before coming here to post it, you will always have it. I hope this helps Margaret. I hope I got your name right. LOL. God bless.
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BROKEN,busted,thrown aside
Too LATE now to mend it,
This is my FINAL STATEMENT
GOODBYE MY LOVE 'tis ended.

I am not good at FAKING
Seem i'm LESS THAN PERFECT to
(INCOMPATIBLE) surely not
Do I seem like that to you.???

YOU'RE STILL IN MY HEART, my dearest
And WISHES are what I am making
I'm not JUST A TOY to throw away
I've been, giving YOU'VE BEEN taking.

WHAT'S WRONG with you, ANGEL OF MINE
You must NEVER GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS.
I am THE ONE, you LOVE BUT NOT LOVED
While my love,is TIMELESS LOVE it seems.

Just a bit of fun. Hope you get it this time.
Thank you Steve for your help. Marigold ( Margaret)
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Hi there Steve. Now I see it TWICE. Silly me margaret.
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Silly works for me!!!!!!!!!!! LOL. God bless.
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