" When"

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" When"

Postby Nancy on Fri Nov 21, 2008 12:55 pm

When I first layed eyes on you,
There was no doubt in my mind.
I wanted to wrap you around my heart,
And keep you by my side for all time.

When I look deep into your eyes,
I see the love you have for me.
Holding you, I hold everything and,
I know than where I'm suppose to be.

When I take you in my loving arms,
I know this is where you belong.
You have filled my heart with love,
And now all my lonilness is gone.

When I'm laying next to you,
You always hold me just right.
I want to fall asleep in your arms,
As you hold me every single night.

When you came into my life,
You made my dreams come true.
You filled my life with happiness,
And I would be lost without you.

When we are together like this,
There's one thing you'll always know.
That you're everything I'll ever need,
And I'm never going to let you go.



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Re: " When"

Postby Jeff Guest on Fri Nov 21, 2008 1:29 pm

Now this would make a wonderful card my friend!!! This is absolutely beautiful Nancy, a true work of art!!! Excellent!!!
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Re: " When"

Postby Nancy on Fri Nov 21, 2008 1:41 pm

Oh thank you my dear friend. Like I said, I haven't forgotten what it feels like to be in love. You are so sweet and I thank you for your kind words. I am going to post some more love poems in here, hope you like them too. GOD BE WITH YOU MY FRIEND.
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Re: " When"

Postby ARPoet on Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:00 pm

Wow Nancy! this is one of the best love poems i have read for many a long day. Well done.. Hugs xx Roger
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Re: " When"

Postby Nancy on Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:16 pm

Oh thank you my dear friend Roger. Well I have posted another love poem in here just now. Hope you like it. Thank you again and GOD BLESS YOU MY FRIEND.
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Re: " When"

Postby webmaster on Sun Nov 30, 2008 3:43 pm

Beautifully written love poem Nancy. This is my second attempt at making slideshow ecards:

http://ecards.nethugs.com/when2.shtml

I hope you like what I did with your wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and thank you all who nominated this masterpiece.
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Re: " When"

Postby Janice Kennedy on Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:30 pm

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This is just so fabulous, Nancy. Now, I am going to have to find me a sweetheart, so I can send this to him. It is really beautiful my friend.

Love and Blessings Joyful Jan
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WOW, Skip, for only your second new style, you leave me speechless, well almost. I can't wait to see your next one. WOW

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Re: " When"

Postby DeaconSteve on Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:13 pm



The poem is beautiful and touching and very meaningful and the combined with the awsomeness of Skip's creative skills, it is just one big awesome work of art on both your parts. I love it bunches. Congraulations Nancy. This is indeed a winner. ***** for sure. God bless.

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Re: " When"

Postby wvhillbilly47 on Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:32 pm

Dear Nancy!
Congratulations on the ecard! It is a really beautiful card in the way Skip has taken your write, and added the new graphics to create one that hightlights the talents of both of you!!
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Re: " When"

Postby Nancy on Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:40 pm

oh my skip I just love what you did with my love poem, Thank you so very much and you sure did a GREAT job on it.....GOD BLESS YOU MY DEAR FRIEND
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Re: " When"

Postby Nancy on Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:42 pm

THANK YOU SHEILA, DEACONSTEVE, AND JAN FOR YOUR SWEET AND KIND WORDS. GOD BLESS YOU MY SWEET DEAR FRIENDS FOR BEING MY FRIENDS. I THANK GOD FOR YOU ALL. GOD BLESS YOU ALL
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