Would you be my valentine
Would you be my sweetheart
Could I be the only one
You hold dear to your heart
Would you be my valentine
Would you be my friend
Could we stay together
Until the very end
Would you be my valentine
Would you hold me tight
Could we even possibly
Be each others guiding light
Would you be my valentine
Could your love light shine
And on this special valentines
WOULD YOU PLEASE BE MINE
WROTE 2/2/2008 BY Norman Hale jr
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Would You Be My Valentine
by norman on Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:16 pm
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
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Would You Be My Valentine
by debi on Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:58 pm
Norman,
I just keep going back to this card. Love the part about would you be my friend. It just says so much about love and friendship. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. May God bless your Love.
Your friend, Debi Drennen
I just keep going back to this card. Love the part about would you be my friend. It just says so much about love and friendship. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. May God bless your Love.
Your friend, Debi Drennen
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Would You Be My Valentine
by wvhillbilly47 on Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:19 pm
Norman,
I agree with Debbi that the part about friendship is so very important to a lasting relationship...so often one puts things into motion so quickly, that it is all over before the light gets to shine the brightest - as the bulb is blown out!
Thanks for the lovely poem. It is sweet, and from your heart of hearts!
In Friendship,
Sheila
I agree with Debbi that the part about friendship is so very important to a lasting relationship...so often one puts things into motion so quickly, that it is all over before the light gets to shine the brightest - as the bulb is blown out!
Thanks for the lovely poem. It is sweet, and from your heart of hearts!
In Friendship,
Sheila
The proud heritage of my forefathers has given me the freedoms that are those to claim as mine. May I always give homage to the sacrifices they have made to bring me to this place, this day!
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by marysaerie on Wed Feb 13, 2008 5:08 pm
Hello, Norman.
I have mixed emotions about this poem....... It is both serious and happy at the same time..... I really like it, and I keep reading it over and over. It is sort of like a little boy trying to figure out how to tell his sweetheart that he likes her..... 'Could you? Would you?' Nicely done!
Hugs,
Mary from her grey and snowy aerie
I have mixed emotions about this poem....... It is both serious and happy at the same time..... I really like it, and I keep reading it over and over. It is sort of like a little boy trying to figure out how to tell his sweetheart that he likes her..... 'Could you? Would you?' Nicely done!
Hugs,
Mary from her grey and snowy aerie
"Whatever you ask, in Faith, you shall receive."
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by webmaster on Wed Feb 13, 2008 9:27 pm
Another excellent one Norman! It's an e-card:
http://ecards.nethugs.com/wouldvalentine.shtml
You sure know what I like! You Valentine poems really melts the heart. Thank you for sharing.
http://ecards.nethugs.com/wouldvalentine.shtml
You sure know what I like! You Valentine poems really melts the heart. Thank you for sharing.
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by Janice Kennedy on Wed Feb 13, 2008 9:53 pm
Congratulations Norman. Skips presentation is just so beautiful. Your poem is fantastic. 
Love and Blessings Joyful Jan
Love and Blessings Joyful Jan
JESUS MESSIAH, NAME ABOVE ALL NAMES. JESUS MESSIAH, LORD OF ALL.
LET YOUR LIGHT SHINE ALL THE TIME
LET YOUR LIGHT SHINE ALL THE TIME
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Would You Be My Valentine
by wvhillbilly47 on Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:05 pm
Hey Norman...congrats also. 
I just saw that it had been made into an e-card, and I have just viewed it. Skip has done a wonderful job of taking your poem and adding the music, and floating hearts...all so pretty!
Keep up the good work there...you must be a real "valentine" to that wife of yours!! She is a lucky gal!!
Again congrats to you!!
Sheila
I just saw that it had been made into an e-card, and I have just viewed it. Skip has done a wonderful job of taking your poem and adding the music, and floating hearts...all so pretty!
Keep up the good work there...you must be a real "valentine" to that wife of yours!! She is a lucky gal!!
Again congrats to you!!
Sheila
The proud heritage of my forefathers has given me the freedoms that are those to claim as mine. May I always give homage to the sacrifices they have made to bring me to this place, this day!
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by norman on Fri Feb 15, 2008 11:51 pm
thanks marysaerie, and sheila and skip and janice
i'm glad you all enjoye
you did a great job with the e-card as well skip
i'm glad you all enjoye
you did a great job with the e-card as well skip
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
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