******** The Ride ********

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vickielynn
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******** The Ride ********

Post by vickielynn » Thu Jul 21, 2011 12:35 am

This really is different but something that was on my mind so I had to write it and post it, not really what I write about sorry guys... but it,s there and was screaming to come out.... :)

It was a late cold winter night a long dark lonely road,
I was on my way back home had just dropped off a load.
I came upon a woman so I pulled over to the side,
I said excuse me ma,am but can I offer you a ride.
I moved papers from the seat laid them in the floor,
I helped her climb into the truck then she shut the door.
she said my name is Lena I can,t seem to start my car,
I only live a little ways and it,s really not all that far.
the wind was deathly cold the snow was getting thick,
she said I have to hurry home my baby,s very sick.
she sat there for a moment then she went on to say,
this is really kind of you not to many come this way.
can I ask you a question do you believe in God,
as I turned to look at her then I gave her a nod.
do you believe in angels God,s sends them to earth,
some of us have angels from our time of birth.
do you believe after you die your spirit stays behind,
confused it looks for answers some spirits never find.
I drove a little ways and she talks for awhile,
I"ll get out up here then she gives me a smile.
so I stopped to let her out she said you are so kind,
I said it was no problem that I really did,nt mind.
she got out and shut the door before I could say,
thank you sir for the ride I watched her walk away.
she was there one moment then she was out of sight,
maybe it was just because it was a dark and snowy night.
I read about an accident a young mother has died,
does Lena ever make it home does she still wait for a ride... :oops:
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Re: ******** The Ride ********

Post by Hope » Thu Jul 21, 2011 1:03 pm

Vicky,
You do not have to apologize for what you write I love all your poems and I love the variety! This is so good and I really enjoyed it so much.

God Bless You love Eva

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Post by vickielynn » Fri Jul 22, 2011 1:04 am

Thank you my #1 fan you would tell me that just not to hurt my feeling God bless you sweetheart lol vickie :D )))(((
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Post by Hope » Fri Jul 22, 2011 8:21 am

vickie,
I really would not just tell you that! I really do enjoy all of your poems they are all so good and I can relate to all of them, well except this one see I was honest LOL! But I really did like it. I just know if someones spirit got in my car I would more than likely have a heart attack from fear LOL!

God Bless You Love Eva

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Post by vickielynn » Sat Jul 23, 2011 12:32 am

oh sweetheart you are such a joy in my life and such an inspiration to me you give me encouragement and that means alot to me but like I said this one was just an ideal in my head that I wanted to write and post, I love your poems also you write from your heart God speaks through you in such a beautiful and special way you have a true gift why have you not tried to publish a book for the whole world to see, love ya girl God bless vickie :) )))(((
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Post by Hope » Sat Jul 23, 2011 10:24 am

Vickie,
You are always so sweet and you say the most encouraging things. I have published 3 small inspirational books that are all over everywhere only by the Grace of God! I did not publish them for fortune or fame but to be a Blessing to someone in some small way if it was not for God I could not of done this and I am so grateful that He is in charge and knows what He is doing. The glory is and always will be all His!

Love You Eva

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Re: ******** The Ride ********

Post by Jeff Guest » Sat Jul 23, 2011 10:32 am

This is an excellent story poem Vickie, loved every line of this edge of your seat read!!!


Excellent!!!


Wonderful!!!


Magnificent!!!
"For God’s mercy reaches unto the heavens, and His truth unto the clouds" (Psalm 57:10, NKJV).

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Re: ******** The Ride ********

Post by vickielynn » Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:15 am

oh I just love you guys you sure know how to bring a tear to this old gals eye, you guys are a true blessing from God and I love you all God bless you all vickie )))((( :cry:
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