One Wish....

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blessed
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One Wish....

Post by blessed » Mon Nov 17, 2014 10:41 pm


If I had just one wish,
I'd wish you could just see..
How your hurtful words
Cut deep inside of me.

You say you really love me.
And though you're always there,
deep within my heart,
I feel you just don't care.

You cuss, put down and argue;
Complain at all I do.
How much all this just hurts me,
But you haven't got a clue.

I try so very hard,
If only you could see.
How the tiniest little effort
Means so much more to me.

You choose not to support me
In anything I do,
When you criticize my efforts,
You make my heart so blue.

Never would I do that,
I'd never put you down.
If I ever saw you unhappy
I would turn your frown around.

I'd tell you just how proud
I am with all you do.
You know that I'm not lying,
For I'm always true with you.

So why can't you be happy
With all I try to be?
You're always so against me,
For what reason I can not see.

So if ever i could wish,
I'd wish you so much joy.
I'd wish you to be happy,
And that life you would enjoy.
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Re: One Wish....

Post by Brenda Pike » Tue Nov 18, 2014 2:48 pm

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BLESSED, YOUR POEM DESCRIBES SO MANY PEOPLE WHO HAVE THIS SAME SITUATION. I SURELY FEEL FOR THEM, BUT I SAY TAKE A STAND FOR YOURSELF AND IF THAT ISN'T ENOUGH LET THEM FIND A NEW ZIP CODE. NO ONE DESERVES TO BE TREATED IN THIS MANNER. GOD BLESS YOU, LOVE BRENDA

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Re: One Wish....

Post by blessed » Tue Nov 18, 2014 8:22 pm

I agree Brenda..God is the only one I know for sure is on my side. He will definitely never leave me nor forsake me...so I move forward in faith relying, depending, and trusting in Him only and completely...be blessed :wink:
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Re: One Wish....

Post by norman » Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:24 am

nicely penned blessed
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

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Re: One Wish....

Post by blessed » Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:43 am

Thanks Norman...I've noticed that the best poems I'm inspired to write are the one's that come directly from the circumstances I experience; which in turn gives me strength to persevere. :D Be blessed
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