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Sherbear
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Broken

Post by Sherbear » Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:38 pm

No more beautiful dreams
Of how our lives will be
No more long talks at night
No more spending time with me.

No more happiness
Do I feel inside.
Now I just feel numb
For all my hope has died!

My heart has now become
A tempest tossed sea,
Filled with tears for love lost,
There sorrow sails for me.

My heart is being broken
On a Medieval Torture device.
But still I can not walk away,
And heed my own advice!

For tales such as this has happened,
Ever since the dawn of time.
But this tale is very personal,
Because this one is mine.

By,
Sherry Falling Leaf Jones
Copyright 2014

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Hope
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Re: Broken

Post by Hope » Sat Apr 26, 2014 10:14 pm

Sherry,
This is so good but so sad! I know so many will be touched by this I hope this isn't about you!

God Bless You Love Eva

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Re: Broken

Post by Sherbear » Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:40 pm

Thanks Eva, no it isn't about me hon, don't worry ok? hugs :)

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Re: Broken

Post by norman » Mon Apr 28, 2014 6:57 pm

nicely written sherbear
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

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Re: Broken

Post by Sherbear » Tue May 13, 2014 11:20 am

Thanks Jr.

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