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Sir Daniel
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Genesis

Post by Sir Daniel » Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:26 pm

G E N E S I S


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Using just one finger,
I arrange the clouds across the sky
I color them white
And blow them toward heaven..

the sun watches in awe..

The northern star,
in it's quest to find immorality
I pull in a little closer,
just beyond the reaches
of the human eye..

Next
I speak to the wind -

"Softer", I say,
It whispers to me in obedience..

Knowing your love for water
I create an ocean
I make it flow for thousands of miles
I give it the depths of my heart.
satisfied,
I walk away..
the tide washes up against my feet
yet I leave no footprints..

I imagine a cabin ahead
facing the newly created ocean
music playing quietly
(a song you used to love..)

Wishfully,
I picture you on the balcony
Your eyes fuel my sun
Your smile painted in dreams
You wave happily at me,
I wave back
then..


you fade away..

Raindrops fall around me
as I realize
you were
never
there..

Although,
In this world I am God
I create heaven on Earth
I move mountains and rivers
The one thing I can not do

Is bring you back...

You,
my love -
only exist
in my memory..

With the turn of my head
I dry up the ocean
I erase the sun,
Replacing it with the moon
Who silently watches
the flowers die..

I look toward our cabin
now in ruins..
and see a cave
that goes no where
yet goes every where..

It's mystery invites me
However I know I can not explore.

Your memory keeps me away...

After some time..
I walk though a garden
Searching for answers
Asking no questions
Accepting my own divinity
While wishing for mortality
A real world --
that I could spend with you...


As the branches part before me,
I allow a bird to sing.

I stop for a second and listen
forgetting you are gone
Looking upward,
I use just one finger
and arrange the clouds in the sky

I color them gray
And blow them toward heaven

The moon watches in fear...





© 2010

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Re: Genesis

Post by Linner » Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:52 pm

Holy Moly !!! :shock: What a powerful poem, Daniel !! This is awesome writing, man, just plain awesome !! Daniel, you have such a brilliant mind...and a soft, loving heart. You have fooled me before, many times, into thinking that your writes were about you. This one I surely hope is not. What a magnificent write, Daniel...geez.....

Love always, Linda
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Re: Genesis

Post by Jeff Guest » Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:17 pm

Priceless, they just don't hardly get any better than this, truly a poetic masterpiece!!!

Bravo!!!
"For God’s mercy reaches unto the heavens, and His truth unto the clouds" (Psalm 57:10, NKJV).

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Re: Genesis

Post by norman » Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:45 pm

awesome writing here daniel
keep'em coming
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

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Re: Genesis

Post by Sir Daniel » Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:33 pm

thank you all, Genesis is from deep in my heart and inspired by the poetic style of a good friend of mine.. i'm growing a little tired of writing sad love poetry (regardless how beautiful) and have my hopes crossed for something more positive in the future..

take care all,

~ Daniel

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