GIFT OF GIVING

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GIFT OF GIVING

Post by baitthebilly » Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:49 pm

Gift Of Giving

Darling you mean so much to me
You do and give to me to see
Your love each and every day
And do your part to pave the way.

Giving, never asking for anything in return
Your heart and love continues to burn
Reaching out finding ways to give
Finding contentment within how you live.

I too wish for you to have happiness
I give you my love, I do not think less
I give to you so that you feel more
It is you in my life that I really adore.

My wants, desires, and needs too
Are blessed so many times with you
I give to you my everlasting love
It is blessed by our father above.

Together we find things so much better
Forever doing things down to the letter
Always striving a better way to enhance
Of our relationship as we romance.

And as we continue on in our march
Not allowing ourselves to become parch
But by thriving always moving ahead
Never allowing anything to become stead.

Written 2-13-2010
Happy-Marvin :D :D :D

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Re: GIFT OF GIVING

Post by Hope » Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:28 pm

Marvin,
What a Loving Love poem, this is so good and really touches the heart, Your wife is a very lucky lady to have you to Love her so much, and it sounds like you are lucky also.

God Bless You Eva

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Post by baitthebilly » Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:27 pm

Why thank you Eva, those were very wonderful comments you have given to me...However I am not
married yet, though am in serious relationship...Again thanks and God Bless....Happy-Marvin :D :D :D

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Re: GIFT OF GIVING

Post by rosypetal » Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:13 am

Dear Marvin,

it is such a hearfelt poem, not just rhymes very well, and it is also
burning with your sincere love and emotions throught out words and lines...
from begnning till the end, you carrying us to the fire of your flames - of your
beautiful heart!
very enjoy it! God bless you and bless your beautiful feelings!
Rosy

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Post by baitthebilly » Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:39 am

Oh Rosy, you are so kind and thoughtful, a blessing to all who may come into contact with you..so becoming of you...It makes me very happy and honored, just knowing you as I do, and I appreciate your warm comments,
thank you, sweetie...God Bless You...Happy-Marvin :D :D :D

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Post by DeaconSteve » Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:15 am


I don't know what to say Marvin that I haven't just told you in my email. This is definitely an extremely good poem, and most certainly fitting for an e-card, and who knows what fomat after that. Just one awesom poem. I think that any lady would be blessed to get this. Thank you for sharing it. God bless my friend. Keep up the excellent writing, especially since I am writing so little. Ha! Ha! Later.
Live today as if it were your last, for tomorrow it will be your past, but live it with peace in mind, joy to find, and for God divine!

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Post by baitthebilly » Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:35 am

Thank you Steve for the wonderful comments, an e-card, that would really make my day..We had better put an
APB out for chee chee to return and give you some relief, as I know you are very busy here at Nethugs, plus with your own site you have..And I am sure too, that you would like to get back to writing some of your own
poems to submit as well...Again thank you for commenting, it is appreciated very much...God Bless You..
Happy-Marvin :D :D :D

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Post by Shakela » Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:23 pm

Well, well Marv, you've finally learned how to send the link. Thank you for doing so! This is a beautiful, heartfelt poem so full of love for that one lucky lady who has captured your heart. I am so glad that you have finally found the person that you can share your life with ~God is truly amazing in the areas of love, don't you think? I've enjoyed this poem so much, my friend and you definitely have my vote on an e-card! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and all those you love.

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Post by baitthebilly » Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:46 pm

Thank you Shakela, your comments are always appreciated...God is good, he provides and enables us to seek the good in others, and with our faith in him, our blessings are many..The link, thanks in telling me how to do it properly... :roll: God Bless You...Happy-Marvin :D :D :D

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Post by Jeff Guest » Mon Apr 19, 2010 10:44 am

Absolutely Beautiful, really enjoyed this magnificent poem!!!Gets my vote for an Ecard!!!
"For God’s mercy reaches unto the heavens, and His truth unto the clouds" (Psalm 57:10, NKJV).

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Post by baitthebilly » Mon Apr 19, 2010 5:47 pm

Thanks Jeff...I am glad you have enjoyed the poem...It makes me happy just to be able to share it with others..God Bless You..Happy-Marvin :D :D :D

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