Wishful Thinking

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Wishful Thinking

Post by mystery » Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:40 pm

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Long lace curtains billow in the evening breeze
Wafting in the scent of a honeysuckle night,
Darkening blue skies flirt with pink dusk clouds
A choir of birds take their last cool flight.

In with the breeze blow thoughts of you.
I close my eyes and dream a sweet dream,
Honeyed twilight enfolds this vision
And you stand here beside me it seems.

But it was only my own wishful thinking
That had you bend and kiss my hand.
It was not your soft hair that tickled
But still I touch where your kisses land.

The moon kisses the sun goodbye,
Farewell until a new dawn will awaken.
Another day towards new horizons
And all demon ills gladly forsaken.

Dream with me my love tonight.
Meet me by a pool so deep,
Swim with me in loves embrace
And hold me close please while I sleep.



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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Sir Daniel » Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:50 pm

hi baby,

hope your enjoying your holiday, I'm missing you..

seems to me that today you stand at one end of the Atlantic and I the other, we both are guilty of wishful thinking, wishing those waves could crash in on the miles that seperate us thereby bringing us closer together... We both know that it will only be a matter of time.

I love this poem, I think it is one of my favorites you wrote me. The sadness inside is reflected in my own poetry for you. One day we will write poetry together, from the same desk, and there will not be a drop of sadness in it.

could I walk on water, I would be in your arms right now...

your D..

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Jeff Guest » Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:19 pm

What an equisite ecard this will make, I've pointed Skipper in this direction!!!

Absolutely Beautiful!!!
"For God’s mercy reaches unto the heavens, and His truth unto the clouds" (Psalm 57:10, NKJV).

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Hope » Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:47 pm

Mystery,
your writing is so heartfelt and touches the soul, you are so gifted, I will be so happy when you and Daniel can finally be together,This is so beautiful, it would be a beautiful Ecard so many would share it,

God Bless You
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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Helen Herliana » Sat Jul 25, 2009 9:10 pm

Beautiful heartfelt poem Mystery..... Really!

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Pokey's Heart » Sun Jul 26, 2009 3:06 am

ahhh, Mystery, what a treat..you never let us down! Awesome job!
sincerely,
Denise
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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by webmaster » Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:24 pm

Beautiful Mystery! Just Beautiful! It's an ecard:

http://nethugs.com/love/wishful-thinking/

Thank you for sharing with us this very visually romantic poem. Thank you also to everyone that nominated this gem.
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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Linner » Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:45 pm

Ohhhhh....!!! Remember when I said I thought I was in love ?? I still am....with the way your fabulous mind writes these fabulous poems, Mystery !!! Friend Daniel is a lucky human being to have collaboration with you ....not to mention love ... in his future !! On the other side of that coin, girl....you are one lucky woman to have our Daniel bring the same attributes to share with you as well. Good gosh...when y'all get together, the poetry is going to be SOMETHING ELSE !!! I have one thing to say to ye, woman....don't be dallyin' with our Daniel !! He is very important to us, you know...we love him mightily here and if anything goes sour....Daniel, the animal troops are ready to move down in south Florida. We know how to do it, right ???

So, with the threat of animal takeover, I now breathe a deep breath and say again, Mystery...just fabulous writing. I am so sucked in with you imagery...I am THIS CLOSE to proclaiming you the Image Queen of NetHugs...lol !!!

Love, Linda :D :lol: :lol: :wink:
Always be kind and fair; it all comes back to you in time ! Image

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by mystery » Sun Aug 02, 2009 6:04 am

Such beautiful messages ... thank you all so much, I value your opinions so much and I'm so honoured Wishful Thinking has been turned into an e.card!

Daniel I wish we could be together sooner, my heart misses you and my soul is not complete without you. Life makes things so hard so we may appreciate things more I feel, soon sweetheart .... soon. K xxxxxx

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by skipper » Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:27 pm

Wow! Such beautiful verse. Great imagination, and touching inspiration.
The last four lines really impressed me.
Keep writing and inspiring Ms. Mystery.

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by rosypetal » Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:19 am

it is very beautiful with such beautiful image too! but i run out of time, i will read its card link tonight, and comment more. wish its beautiful lyrics can relaxing my after work tireness away... Thank you!
beautiful poetry! as if tune, as if music, as if the air of April, as if a romaning morning.... softly greets our hearts.....
very enjoy it!

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Re: Wishful Thinking

Post by Brenda Pike » Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:46 am

MYSTERY, WONDERFUL MASTERPIECE AS ALWAYS. GLAD TO SEE YOU BACK IN HUGS WITH YOUR MAGIC OF POETRY. LOVE EVERY WORD OF YOUR POEM. LOVE BRENDA
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