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mystery
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by mystery » Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:29 pm
Like the surf kisses the white sand
And how soft petals feel inside your hand;
Like crisp snow lying fresh on the land
But they don’t compare to my love for you.
Honeysuckle scents on a moonlit night,
Daisies pretty in yellow and white;
Pastel beauty like a painted twilight
But they’ll never compare to my love for you.
Cosy nights in with a bottle of wine,
Watching the stars on a frosty night shine,
That contented feeling that all is fine
Are no comparison to my love for you.
But all the above we’ll share together,
Hand in hand so right forever,
Loneliness again? My darling never
For our love ever after compares to none.
I love you.
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Sir Daniel
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by Sir Daniel » Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:44 pm
my gosh baby, this is so beautiful, I am speechless..
if this doesn't deserve to be an e-card then I have yet to read a poem that does.
you have my heart baby, and keep writing like this and you will have everyone elses too..
love you,
your D.
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mystery
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by mystery » Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:08 pm
Thank you so much, I feel so honoured. It brought a tear to my eye sap that I am ....
Thank you, gosh what a huge compliment, hugs. M xx
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Pokey's Heart
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by Pokey's Heart » Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:45 pm
Congratulations, Mystery! AWESOME!
always,
Denise

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