"I Need You This Much"

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"I Need You This Much"

Postby Nancy » Thu Dec 25, 2008 5:20 am

I was lost in a moment with you,
As we sealed our love with a kiss.
You've always had this hold on me,
And you'll always know where my heart is.

Everything I need is everything you are,
I couldn't imagine my life without you.
You're the only one that I'll ever need,
Because my heart couldn't beat without you.

I just want to kiss you all over daring,
Whenever we are together like this.
I want to melt in your loving arms,
When I get lost in your tender kiss.

I need you wrapped in my arms darling,
When it comes to you, I can't get enough.
You're locked so deep in my heart and,
All I'll ever need is your sweet love.

You say all the things I need to hear,
When you hold me so close and tenderly.
There's truth in your eyes darling,
That says you'll never leave me.

You are everything in life I'll need,
Darling I do love you so very much.
You're the one I've been looking for,
And I'll always need you this much.


Written by: Nancy on 8-10-08
Last edited by Nancy on Mon Jan 12, 2009 4:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby norman » Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:16 pm

awesome writing here nancy

i'm glad you feel so strongly lol
just teasin you :D
but if you was to change

Everything I need is everything you are,
I couldn't imagine my life without you.
You're the only man that I'll ever need,
Because my heart couldn't without you.


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Everything I need is everything you are,
I couldn't imagine my life without you.
You're the only one that I'll ever need,
Because my heart couldn't without you.

it would make an awesome e-card for valetinesday coming up in a month or so
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby Nancy » Mon Jan 12, 2009 4:03 pm

Thanks my friend, I made the changes, take a look now my friend. Thank you for your help and GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby webmaster » Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:09 pm

Beautifully written! I love it. It's an ecard:

http://ecards.nethugs.com/thismuch.shtml

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work with us Nancy. It's splendid!
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby ARPoet » Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:23 pm

Great Ecard Nancy... Hope you are getting your computer sorted out now. Hows the romance novel coming on?
hugs XX Roger
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby Janice Kennedy » Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:50 pm

This is one of your very best, Nancy. You really out did yourself on this one, girl.


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Fabulous job, Skip, I really like it.


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Love and Blessings Joyful Jan :D :D :D
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby DeaconSteve » Thu Jan 29, 2009 9:46 pm



WOW! Nancy, you nailed a winner with this one, and our Skip has made an awesome ecard of it. Very beatiful poem to start with. Just beautiful by both of you. I also love it. BRAVO!!
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby DreamNight » Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:55 pm

Awww thats very beautiful,Good job.
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby norman » Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:12 am

awesome job here nancy

a well deserved e-card

keep'em comin
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby joliefille9237 » Thu Feb 05, 2009 5:55 pm

Awesome ecard, very beautiful... you know what i could make this poem a very famous song.. if you dont mind.. but if you do mind, i wont even bother, because i am going to become a famous song artist, i just need to practice a few things and get my band together. i think this would make a wonderful song.. and if you want, you could be my lyrics writer.. i really hope you wouldnt mind... please? and i would really appreciate it if you did that...
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby Nancy » Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:18 am

I want to thank Roger, Janice, DeaconSteve, DreamNight, and Norman for your sweet kind words. Skip done a wonderful job with it, so glad you all liked it. I have sent it to some of my friends and they just loved it. And Roger, I've been busy lately and not had much time to work on that romance novel, my daughter is getting married in two weeks and it's been crazy here. I will get busy with that novel when all this is over. Thank you all for your sweet words, they mean so much to me and so do you all. GOD BLESS YOU ALL.
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Re: "I Need You This Much"

Postby Nancy » Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:26 am

Thank you for your kind words, sure you can make this poem a song if you want. I don't write songs just poems. What makes you think I could write songs? Thank you again and GOD BLESS YOU.
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