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Love in a Bottle

Postby ARPoet » Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:18 pm

Love in a Bottle
By
Roger Turner

If I put my heart in a bottle,
I would seal the cork with a kiss.
Then what I would do,
Is send the bottle to you,
A Bottle full of love for one that I miss.

If I put love in a bottle,
A gift for you from me.
I would go to the coast,
To a place I like most,
And drop the bottle in the sea.

This bottle containing all of my love,
Would be carried by currents and tide.
And it would bob along,
Like the notes of a love song,
Until it got to the other side.

So if you are down near the harbour,
And see a bottle washed up the sand.
Don’t un-stopper the cork,
But go on with your walk,
Holding my heart in your hand.

For, I put my heart in that bottle,
To send my love over to you.
And where ever you go,
You will always know,
That my love will always be fresh and new.
Dont rush to do today what you can leave until tomorrow... tomorrow you may do it much better...
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby Janice Kennedy » Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:36 pm

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That is very cute, Roger. I really like it. But, how do you know who will find the bottle???

Love and Blessings Joyful Jan :D
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby Helen Herliana » Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:41 pm

Jan is right. Who will find the bottle? How fortunate is the girl who finds the bottle.
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby ARPoet » Tue Dec 02, 2008 1:39 am

Pure Faith...
Dont rush to do today what you can leave until tomorrow... tomorrow you may do it much better...
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby wvhillbilly47 » Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:45 pm

Hello Roger!
I like your poem, and I particularly like the answer you gave to the question...."How will you know who gets the bottle", and you say, "Faith".........yes, indeed.
Very nice write of love!
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby DeaconSteve » Tue Dec 02, 2008 8:02 pm


You sure have a way with words Roger. Just one very good poet my friend. I enjoyed this one and I think it was meant for a lady. I hope that bottle makes it to it's destination. Excelllent write. God bless.
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby webmaster » Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:57 pm

This poem is beautifully penned Roger! It's an ecard:

http://ecards.nethugs.com/lovebottle.shtml

It's very sweet and I am sure a lot of our subscribers will send it to their significant other. Thank you for sharing your talent with us here at NetHugs.
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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby Janice Kennedy » Sat Jan 10, 2009 9:40 pm

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A timeless poem, Roger, and what a wonderful e-card.
CONGRATULATIONS!!!

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Great job here, Skip. I love the music and the graphics are perfect. It will be great for Valentines.

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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby ARPoet » Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:59 am

Many many thanks for your comments and to those who have changed my simple poem into a wonderful E-card. I cant tell you how much it means to me.
God bless you all
Roger

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Re: Love in a Bottle

Postby Helen Herliana » Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:39 am

Congratulation! I'll be waiting for you next e-card.

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