LOVE & H 2 O

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LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Ellen Hammond on Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:30 pm

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Love resembles H 2 O,
As its patient ebb and flow,
Smooths a jagged heart of stone.
Inner beauty thus is shown.

Inner beauty, in its turn
Incites passion's sultry burn
Love and lust commingled, rise
Vapor forms before our eyes

Vapor raptured, unaware
The onset of Arctic air
Erose edges once more form
From thick ice of wintry storm

Ice-packed heart is numbed to pain
'Til warm waters stream again
When embraced by H 2 O
Beware of the undertow

© 2009 Ellen Hammond
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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Pokey's Heart on Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:06 am

beautifully written, Ellen..I was just wondering about you in the last couple of days! Good to see you posting again!
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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Hope on Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:13 am

Ellen,
This is so good I am happy to see one of your poems I really enjoy your writing,

God Bless You Eva
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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Jeff Guest on Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:09 am

Great poem, let God's wind guide the sails of your love, He'll never let you drift out to sea!!!
His compass is never wrong!!! :D :D :D
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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Ellen Hammond on Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:47 am

Hello Pokey, Eva, and Jeff, :D :D :D

Thank you for your lovely comments re this poem. Sorry I haven't been around much as it is getting harder and harder to type without creating a lot of extra pain. I drop in and read but am not always able to type. May God bless you all! ~ Hugs ~ Ellen
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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Jeff Guest on Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:11 am

I'm so very sorry to hear you are having pain Ellen, we will pray that God cover you in His loving comfort!!! Look forward to reading more of your wonderful writes when you are able!!!

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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Happy Holmes1 on Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:47 am

Hi Ellen, the Lord bless your heart, your hands and your fingers you sweetie. I'm so glad to see this very pretty love poem by you on here. I especially like the last stanza, "Ice-packed heart is numbed to pain'Til warm waters stream again." May GOD send the warm waters to stream again for our NetHug buddy, Ellen Hammond.
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Re: LOVE & H 2 O

Postby Ellen Hammond on Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:45 pm

Thank you Jeff and Dawn. :D :D

It is wonderful to know friends are praying and I know the Lord will give me the strength I need to face each day. ~ Blessings ~ Ellen
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