OUR LADY OF SORROWS

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Rita Biesemans
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OUR LADY OF SORROWS

Post by Rita Biesemans » Mon Oct 03, 2016 7:48 pm

OUR LADY OF SORROWS

O dearest Mother, Lady of Sorrows
crying for our todays and tomorrows
cause we, Your children dont care
to listen to Your warnings to prepare
for the coming abomination
and possible eternal damnation
if we dont return to the Lord
and throw our Salvation overboard
Even seeing You cry bloody tears
does not make us change any gears
but what else can one expect
when Church leaders misdirect
and transform a saintly Lucas
into a devil possessed Judas
betraying Jesus as did Iscariot
while they ride their fancy chariot
not pulled by a donkey but by a jaguar
using diversity and coexistence as an avatar
The days are approaching that the real Church
will have to hide, away from the vicious smirch
Jesus Your Son is being crucified again
by the pride and the ingratitude of men
I want to dry Your tears, my sweet Mother
your pain and sufferings I want to smother
by following Your Son our Savior
through an obedient and docile behavior
Rita Biesemans, September 15 2014

Shirley Baucom
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Re: OUR LADY OF SORROWS

Post by Shirley Baucom » Tue Oct 04, 2016 10:44 pm

Amazing!!! Great message here!

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Re: OUR LADY OF SORROWS

Post by wvhillbilly47 » Wed Oct 05, 2016 1:13 am

You have delivered a profound message of the path we must take to find relief from the sin of man!
Your rhyme is excellent and the flow of your words are easily followed in obtaining the way to overcome the wiles of the world, and the false messages we receive!
The proud heritage of my forefathers has given me the freedoms that are those to claim as mine. May I always give homage to the sacrifices they have made to bring me to this place, this day!

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