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Sir Daniel
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Have You Seen

Post by Sir Daniel » Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:37 am

Have You Seen?

Have you seen my Lord Jesus,
Is he alone on that hill?
I'm going to join him
I pledge to serve his will
He told me of and showed me of
A love so true and real,
Have you seen my Lord Jesus
Is he alone on that hill...

Have you seen my Lord and Savior
Is he calling out to me?
I'm ashamed of my behaviour
I found the Man from Galilee
My sins were washed away, I kneel and pray
To thee, Have you seen my Lord and Savior
Is he calling out to me...

Have you seen my Lord, God almighty
Is he searching for my soul
Every day and every night
Beside me he will stroll
No more lying, I've been trying
No denying he is in my soul
Have you seen my Lord and Savior
Is he searching for my soul...



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Post by Jeff Guest » Thu Nov 02, 2006 8:31 am

Excellent poem Sir Daniel enjoyed it much!!!

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Post by Sir Daniel » Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:19 am

Thank You Jeff, this "song" I just found out is being considered for a religious themed CD, I hope it can hold it's own if it is chosen.
I'm new here, by the way, it is nice to meet you.

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Post by Dana Brooks » Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:34 am

this is just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it very much...good luck on the song!!!!!!!!!!! :)

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Post by Sir Daniel » Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:45 am

Thank you Dana,

Encouragment always helps! Thank you for your kind reply. This is a song that I wrote very quickly, posted it on another site on the internet and within a couple days someone had recorded it (amaturish) and was kind enough to mail me a copy back (gotta love the internet)
The tune they sung it too is very catchy and works great, I'm not sure if I was smart enough to have written it or if I just wrote the lyrics but they seem to want to give me credit for the whole song and I'm not going to argue with them.
Again, thanks alot for the kind review. You sure know how to make a new member feel at home.

Sir Daniel

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