Down In The Valley

Post your non religious inspirational / motivational poetry here.
Post Reply
User avatar
norman
Platinum Member
Posts: 4342
Joined: Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:57 am
Location: ohio

Down In The Valley

Post by norman » Sat Aug 24, 2013 7:46 pm

225203_224916124325065_1892807690_n.jpg
225203_224916124325065_1892807690_n.jpg (62.28 KiB) Viewed 1540 times
Down in the valley
The valley so deep
There lays a fair lady
She lays there fast asleep

Her hair is brown
And her eyes are so blue
Just dreaming of her love
Hopes it all comes true

She lives in her te-pee
Deep down in the woods
Staying away from mankind
She has found, up to no good

She sleeps in her te-pee
Up until the break of dawn
Laying with her pet wolf
As well as her baby fawn

She dreams of her a man
To come and be her chief
To hold and console her
Help bring her heart relief

She stays all to herself
Camped out next to to the creek
Sometimes she has sleepless nights
When she just rolls and weeps

She fishes and she hunts
Sometimes with her wolfs help
She mainly hunts for the meat
But, also makes use of the pelt

Someday he may show up
That man of her dreams
And she'll give him babies
To carry on that traditional scream

But until that very day
She'll just live off the land
Right until the time when Angels
Come and take her by the hand

written 8/24/2013 by Norman Hale Jr.
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

User avatar
Hope
Diamond Member
Posts: 10693
Joined: Tue Mar 17, 2009 8:26 am

Re: Down In The Valley

Post by Hope » Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:08 am

Norman,
This is one of your BEST! I really enjoyed this so much and it is Beautiful what Love can do even while waiting for it.

God Bless You Eva

User avatar
norman
Platinum Member
Posts: 4342
Joined: Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:57 am
Location: ohio

Re: Down In The Valley

Post by norman » Sun Aug 25, 2013 4:00 pm

thanks eva this was inspired by this picture i found it on facebook
strange how they come to me at times lol
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

User avatar
B.J.Morbitzer
Platinum Member
Posts: 1319
Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2011 1:29 pm
Location: Ohio

Re: Down In The Valley

Post by B.J.Morbitzer » Mon Aug 26, 2013 1:58 pm

Norman.,
All I can say at this time is this write is just so very beautiful.
I really loved this one you posted.
Just so much heartfelt beauty in this write my friend.
Awesome is all I can say at this moment in time...
God Bless HUGS
B.J.

Post Reply