Would You Be My Valentine?

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norman
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Would You Be My Valentine?

Post by norman » Sun Mar 02, 2014 7:34 pm

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Under this starry sky
Your eyes really do shine
But, I'd like to know
Would you be my Valentine

Hold me by the hand
Let your love light shine
But, please let me know
Would you be my Valentine

Be my Valentine, my love
And take a hold of my heart
Give me your sweet kiss
And let our love start

Hold me tightly dear
Up againt your chest
For this is Cupids
Greatest love test

Press those sweet lips
Up here against mine
It's a lot better than chocolate
So, would you be my Valentine

Valentines day is for lovers
So let your love light shine
Then wrap your arms around me
Then, tell me "You're My Valentine"

written 3/2/2014 by Norman Hale Jr.
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

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Hope
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Re: Would You Be My Valentine?

Post by Hope » Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:54 pm

Norman,
I hope she said yes! This is really cute but a little late for Valentines day. Or you are just starting early for next year. I really enjoyed it.

God Bless You Eva

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Re: Would You Be My Valentine?

Post by norman » Mon Mar 03, 2014 10:53 pm

thanks Eva
I've read all your feed backs on here and yes I've been on a roll it seems lol
I wrote 6 the other day some for a friend on another site lol
this i found in a tablet the 1st 6 lines and finished it yesterday lol funny how they work on me
thanks for the feedback was beginning to wander where you was lol

take care
norman
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL

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