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Post by a.j lover » Sat May 20, 2006 4:21 pm

you're the reason why i love
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
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Post by DeaconSteve » Sat May 20, 2006 4:42 pm

you're the reason why i love
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep

You make me come alive -
when tears fill my eyes,
You make me feel strong -
when I feel so alone
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Live today as if it were your last, for tomorrow it will be your past, but live it with peace in mind, joy to find, and for God divine!

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Post by a.j lover » Sat May 20, 2006 4:45 pm

and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause

(now someone needs to write the chorus)
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Post by LadyBlue » Sun May 21, 2006 12:29 am

Well, I have looked at this over and over and it looks done to me. I think what Raquel wrote is a perfect chorus. Your last verse a.j. leads right back into the first verse so Raquey's is perfect for the chorus of what you and Steve wrote. I was going to look and possibly add something but I think you 3 did it perfectly.


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Post by hisheart » Sun May 21, 2006 7:44 am

That was a great group effort from all of you. Sorry I caught it too late to participate. Very well coordinated and very well written.

Great fun, Tiffany. Everyone have a great day.

Karen
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Post by a.j lover » Sun May 21, 2006 3:26 pm

well if ya'll want to participate we can write more songs...hint hint
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Lyrics

Post by LadyBlue » Sun May 21, 2006 3:29 pm

I will be glad to try, Tiffany, but I have never written lyrics. Poetry is about the extent of the talent I was given, lol. I think it is a great idea, but let me tell you, that Steve, TuningintoGod (Raquel), and Eddy I know are great lyricists. You might call on the best to help you :D. I bet Jeff and Caroline and Falling Leaf could help you too.

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Post by a.j lover » Sun May 21, 2006 3:41 pm

you're the reason why i love
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep

You make me come alive -
when tears fill my eyes,
You make me feel strong -
when I feel so alone.

and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause

You're all that I've needed
From the very first start
You’re my reason;you’re my key
To this gentle precious heart

now when i think of it
and i feel confused
i will look back at you
i will always be amused

and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause

you're all that i've needed
from the very first start
you're my reason; you're my key
to this gentle precious heart

you're all that i've needed
you're all t hat i've needed
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.

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Post by a.j lover » Sun May 21, 2006 3:41 pm

what should this be called?
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Post by a.j lover » Sun May 21, 2006 4:04 pm

k thanks but u know songs are basically poems that u sing to
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Song Title

Post by LadyBlue » Sun May 21, 2006 4:16 pm

How about "You're What I Need"

Yes, but I don't know a thing about verses and choruses and how they have to fit in with the rifts and all that jazz.

I am not saying I won't try. I am just warning you, I may be not be the one you need on lyrics, lololol.

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Post by ~welcome home~ » Sun May 21, 2006 4:19 pm

well just try ur best haha..
welcome home you i know you by name how do you do i shine because of you today so come and sit down tell me how you are i know son its good just to see your face

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Laughing

Post by LadyBlue » Sun May 21, 2006 4:21 pm

:D Well, let's just hope it is good enough for all you amateur/professional wannabe writers, lolololl.

Love n laughter,
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Post by ~welcome home~ » Sun May 21, 2006 4:22 pm

wannabe writers? haha
welcome home you i know you by name how do you do i shine because of you today so come and sit down tell me how you are i know son its good just to see your face

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