Official Song/poem writing thread

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Post by a.j lover » Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:43 pm

lol
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.

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Re: Official Song/poem writing thread

Post by Marigold » Fri Jan 07, 2011 10:48 pm

BROKEN,busted, thrown aside
Too LATE now to mend it,
This is my FINAL STATEMENT
GOODBYE MY LOVE 'tis ended.

I am not good at FAKING
Seems I'm LESS THAN PERFECT to,
INCOMPATIBLE, surely not
Do I seem tlike that to you.

YOU"RE STILL IN MY HEART, my dearest one
And WISHES are what I am making
I'm not JUST A TOY you can throw away
I've been giving, YOU'VE BEEN TAKING.

WHAT'S WRONG with you ANGEL OF MINE
You must NEVER GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS,
I am THE ONE you LOVED BUT NOT LOVED
My love is TIMELESS LOVE, it seems.

Just having a bit of fun. Marigold.

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Re: Official Song/poem writing thread

Post by Marigold » Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:23 am

Please can someone help. I posted a bit of poetry for fun on the poem writing thread this afternoon, but I can not find it. Must have done something wrong. Can anyone help. Marigold.

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Re: Official Song/poem writing thread

Post by DeaconSteve » Sat Jan 08, 2011 6:35 pm

More than likely you didn't save it or submit it. That's the only way you could have lost it. If you type your poetry on a word document before coming here to post it, you will always have it. I hope this helps Margaret. I hope I got your name right. LOL. God bless.
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Re: Official Song/poem writing thread

Post by Marigold » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:17 pm

BROKEN,busted,thrown aside
Too LATE now to mend it,
This is my FINAL STATEMENT
GOODBYE MY LOVE 'tis ended.

I am not good at FAKING
Seem i'm LESS THAN PERFECT to
(INCOMPATIBLE) surely not
Do I seem like that to you.???

YOU'RE STILL IN MY HEART, my dearest
And WISHES are what I am making
I'm not JUST A TOY to throw away
I've been, giving YOU'VE BEEN taking.

WHAT'S WRONG with you, ANGEL OF MINE
You must NEVER GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS.
I am THE ONE, you LOVE BUT NOT LOVED
While my love,is TIMELESS LOVE it seems.

Just a bit of fun. Hope you get it this time.
Thank you Steve for your help. Marigold ( Margaret)

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Re: Official Song/poem writing thread

Post by Marigold » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:20 pm

Hi there Steve. Now I see it TWICE. Silly me margaret.

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Re: Official Song/poem writing thread

Post by DeaconSteve » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:01 pm


Silly works for me!!!!!!!!!!! LOL. God bless.
Live today as if it were your last, for tomorrow it will be your past, but live it with peace in mind, joy to find, and for God divine!

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