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Post by Janice Kennedy » Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:13 am


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I use to think I could write poetry,
now I've discovered all I do is rhyme.


I now, know what my problem is,
Wow wee and gee wizz!


To create a real smooth flow,
feet is what you need to know.


It is one of those rules,
I don't think I learned in school.


Poems they say, have to have feet,
so I guess I will always miss a beat.


That's why I love free style,
that way I can still be versatile.


With my feet being almost square,
there I don't have much flair.


I'll always march to a different beat,
coz I was born with square feet.


Bare footed for me, is a fashion,
writing poetry, is my passion!

I'd rather be a versatile,
than an ordinary reptile!



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Post by Hope » Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:36 am

Jan,
This is so cute, and like you I go bare footed all the time LOL! So my feet must be square also.
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Post by B.J.Morbitzer » Wed Feb 13, 2013 12:03 pm

Dear Friend Jan.,
I agree with Eva., This one is so,so cute my friend :D
I like this one you shared today Jan.
Just keep on writing my friend because you usually come up with very good writing from your heart too.
GLYASDI
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Post by Janice Kennedy » Wed Feb 13, 2013 12:21 pm

Thank you, Dear Eva. Barefooted is the only way to go.
I have been told, my feet are so square, because of the
Native American blood in me. I am glad you enjoyed my poem!

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Post by Janice Kennedy » Wed Feb 13, 2013 12:31 pm

Dear Friend, B.J. I am happy that you found my poem amusing!
I did not know about writing poems with feet, until I had been writing for a couple of years.
I think that I still don't do it very well, but I still love to try.
I think at times that the message in a poem can be more important!

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Post by Brenda Pike » Wed Feb 13, 2013 3:28 pm

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DEAR JAN, WHAT A WONDERFUL FUNNY POEM, LOVE IT. WHAT IS FEET YOUR TALKING ABOUT BECAUSE I SURE HAVEN'T HEARD THE TERM FEET IN WRITING POETRY. OR IS THAT JUST A PART OF THE FUNNY IN THE POEM? GOING BARE FOOT SURE FEELS GREAT. AND FREE STYLE POETRY IS THE WAY I LIKE TO WRITE ALSO. THIS IS A VERY JOYFUL POEM TO READ, HAVING FUN FROM EACH STANZA. GOD BLESS YOU DEAR FRIEND. LOVE BRENDA

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Post by Janice Kennedy » Wed Feb 13, 2013 4:14 pm

I will try to explain feet, in poetry to you Brenda.
But, I find it difficult myself, so I am not sure that I can do
it correctly. Feet refers to the patterns of stressed and
unstressed syllables in a poem. Feet is the same as the meter.
You can look it up on Google, Maybe they can explain it better
than I can. Wished I knew better how to explain it, my friend!
I hope you were able to enjoy the poem anyway. :lol:

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Post by Brenda Pike » Wed Feb 13, 2013 9:00 pm

THANKS JAN, I'LL DO SOME RESEARCH NOW THAT I KNOW WHAT I'M LOOKING FOR. :D THIS FEET IS A NEW WORD WITH A TOTALLY DIFFERENT MEANING TO ME. GLAD TO HAVE INFORMATION ON A NEW WORD. THANKS AGAIN.
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Post by DeaconSteve » Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:12 pm

I don't think that you need to worry about the "feet" thing Brenda, that's just Jan doing what Jan does, write funny and sometimes off the wall poems. You just have to like them or leave them, and sometimes go away confused. This one I like also, free style and weird and funny. God bless.
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Post by sto6 » Sat Nov 29, 2014 4:56 pm

Dear Janice, your poems are beautiful, i love the patterns and your choice of words.I have been away from nethugs too long,and i have lost the skill in writing poetry,but i will read more of your poems so i can improve on my skills

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