WHAT'S GOING ON

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logicalinfo
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WHAT'S GOING ON

Post by logicalinfo » Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:52 am

WHAT'S GOING ON

Somebody said who and a man answered her
Another asked when and she said now
Just what's going on

You go out with a girl and don't know her name
End up at a party and play some weird games

You turn around and everyone's gone
You really wish you knew what's going on

You pick up your things and turn on your heel
And suddenly you see a giant ferris wheel
You wonder what's going on

You go for a ride and sit and think
You feel like you could use a drink
Just what's going on

You go to a bar and find a seat
Then remember you've had nothing to eat
What really went on

You reach for your money and feel really glad
There's nothing there, boy, you've been had
Just what's going on

The world, son, that's whats going on
You'll grow up one day to a man no doubt

This world is strange but really quiet real
You grew up tonight, a bit I feel
Yes, now you know what's going on

Written by TESS

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Hope
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Re: WHAT'S GOING ON

Post by Hope » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:56 pm

Tess,
You tell it like it is sometimes in this world today. This was very good and I really liked how you wrote it.

God Bless You Eva

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