WHISPERS

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SILVERFEATHER
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WHISPERS

Post by SILVERFEATHER » Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:31 am

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WHISPERS


There is a stillness
The comforting to the soul kind
Faint whispers slowly passing by ones ear
A gentle brushing of a fairy-like breeze
A fresh breeze from a cool babbling brook
Echo's lingering on...
A forever mist following another and another
Sweetly being heard as a soft blossoming dream
Deeply seaded in your plush garden divine
Peaceful dreams that linger on
Simply waiting to become a silver laced memory
Placing a gentle kiss upon mirrored waters
Creating so slight a ripple
Moving across the reflecting pool of eternal love
From days remembered when running was a fairyland distance
A whisper of an enchanting love call by the Loons on Lake Forevermore
Carried on the winds
Across the golden pond of reality
Framed in sweet fragrances of Lavender
Lilac and honeysuckle for the soul
You're a heartbeat quiet
So to listen for a whisper, be mine
Like a craving for Heaven's Ambrosia
Or taking a breath in anticipation
Filtering a long awaited breeze
For what it could carry in its continuous looping
Then your heart becomes a sigh
You hear the whispering of, "T love you"
There is stillness
So comforting to the soul
Just like a whisper upon the wind...


by Richard Lee Cook
Copyright 2010
An SILVERFEATHER Creation

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Brenda Pike
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Re: WHISPERS

Post by Brenda Pike » Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:20 am

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RICHARD LEE, GREAT POEM OF PEACE, HARMONY OF LIFE AND LOVE. YES WE DO LISTEN FOR THE WORDS, I LOVE YOU IN NATURE AND STILLNESS OF THE MIND. GREAT POEM, I LOVE IT, I CAN RELATE TO THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM. SINCERELY, BRENDA

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Re: WHISPERS

Post by SILVERFEATHER » Sat Nov 20, 2010 3:14 pm

brenda my poetic friend,

thank you for your great comment on this poem.

silverfeather/r.lee :) ))((

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Re: WHISPERS

Post by Morning Star » Sat Nov 20, 2010 5:08 pm

The stillness and beauty of Nature of whispers words of love

And if you’re feeling stress empty and hollow within your soul

It will embrace you and enveloped you within the many

Sweet scented aromas and whispered Into your mind

Words of hope and love and the sun fills your soul with warmth, there is no doubt that

nature whispers

To the soul Peace Love Hope

Lee your words grasped the reader (me) and take you by the hand into

A magical journey as your words captured stunning imagery

And the sounds and aromas is a cleansing to the readers soul

Beautiful flow and outstanding write!

KUDOS MY SWEET FRIEND….MORNING STAR

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Post by SILVERFEATHER » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:44 am

YOLIE MY POETIC MASTERPIECE,

WHAT AN AMAZING REVIEW YOU HAVE SHOWERED ME WITH. YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER OF COMMENTS. THANK YOU MY DEAR DEAR FRPEND.

IN THE LIGHT,
SILVERFEATHER/R.LEE :) ))((

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Post by Hope » Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:49 pm

Richard,
This is so Beautiful! I felt like I was right there enjoying the peace and calming sounds of nature, all of your poems takes you on a journey, and this one was filled with love.

God Bless You Eva

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Post by SILVERFEATHER » Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:08 am

EVA/HOPE MY DEAR FRIEND,

MY HERAT IS FULL... I THANK YOU FOR WORDS THAT SURROUND ME WITH WARMTH. I AM SO GLAD IT TOUCHED YOU, FOR THAT CERTAINLY IS MY GOAL IN WRITING.

IN HIS LIGHT,
SILVERFEATHER/R.LEE :) ))((

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Re: WHISPERS

Post by Don » Thu Jan 13, 2011 5:45 pm

I really like this poem, it spoke (whispered) a soft message to me. Great write.. Don

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Re: WHISPERS

Post by DeaconSteve » Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:24 pm


I am sure that anyone who reads this poem will be mesermized by not only the message but the poetic beauty that you have captured for us Richard. Might be the reason why you should go and view this link. Like the others, I too was very touched, and apparently so was another. God bless and thank you for sharing, though I do read more than I comment too. Just a very busy person. Later my friend. Be sure and scroll all of the way down, until Skip puts it on the list.


http://forums.nethugs.com/viewtopic.php ... 6&start=30


Live today as if it were your last, for tomorrow it will be your past, but live it with peace in mind, joy to find, and for God divine!

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