O My True Friend

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O My True Friend

Post by avipokh » Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:53 am

When the chips are down, and the world seems low
When the heart is sunk, and the tears want to flow
When there is no remedy, for the problem at hand
Then you are always there, O my true friend..

When you hold my hands, in your hands so tight
I feel as if I'm in heaven so bright
When I argue and argue, and tire in the end
Then you are always there, O my true friend

...Avinash Pokhriyal

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Re: O My True Friend

Post by Pokey's Heart » Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:00 am

What a beautiful poem! Welcome to nethugs, am looking forward very much to reading more of yours.
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Re: O My True Friend

Post by Hope » Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:11 am

This is so good, Welcome to Net Hugs1 I am looking forward to reading more of your poems.

God Bless You Eva

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Re: O My True Friend

Post by Jeff Guest » Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:01 am

WELCOME!!! This is excellent, would make a great ecard in my opinion!!! I'll be sure to point the webmaster in this direction, thanks for posting this wonderful piece!!!
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Re: O My True Friend

Post by Happy Holmes1 » Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:23 am

Dear Avinash, you have found a sweet and tender friend. What a sweet poem you have penned. Welcome to NetHugs my dear. I too look forward to your next poem, and would like to see this in an e-card. -Dawn
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Re: O My True Friend

Post by rosypetal » Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:25 am

touching! flowing!

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