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by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:38 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Something Went Wrong
Replies: 10
Views: 2595

Jeri

Hi coldasice, I can't scream loud enough or cry deep enough to help her. This has been her life for the past 14 years now and to see how her addiction has taken our family a thousand different directions is now too tiring to handle. We miss her but we have almost become numb. Getting to this point i...
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:11 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: -------FOG-------
Replies: 18
Views: 3464

Jeri

Hi Miss Caroline!!!
Your poem is beautiful in so many ways. I always thought of the leaves on the trees as nature's eyes. What the leaves must see. Excellent read!!!!!
God's touch
Jeri
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:08 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Something Went Wrong
Replies: 10
Views: 2595

Jeri

Thank you guys. You guys mean a lot to me.
God's touch to you
Jeri
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:07 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Aimless
Replies: 14
Views: 3058

Jeri

Hi dreamtime, Now I can see what you tyelling me about editing. It's right in front of my face. Yea, drama drama drama. I am fine dreamtime. Thank you for your concern my friend. I am getting off this darn drug subject and going back to fantasy and softer stuff. I guess I just screamed for awhile. I...
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:54 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Something Went Wrong
Replies: 10
Views: 2595

Jeri

Hi guys,
Thank you Brad and Deborah.
Glad you like this write. I honestly hate it. It is just too close right now and I am trying my best to vent. Silly huh?
God's touch
Jeri
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:57 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Something Went Wrong
Replies: 10
Views: 2595

Something Went Wrong

Something went wrong somewhere far in your life with blades, a life long, in your hands if asked right. A deep driven hell that you can't put away. A life that had fallen. A mother that prays. Unable, or wanting, to stand in defense, the hell opens wide, unbounded, unfenced. Grabbing and taunting, t...
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:47 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Aimless
Replies: 14
Views: 3058

Jeri "Aimless" revised

I found out I did this form wrong. :lol: My 2nd and 3rd lines in each stanzas were backwards. It is suppose to be like this. Aimless Blameless through the walk of life. Nameless to the eyes that see. Shameless in the ways of night. Aimless leads her destiny. Instructed, yet no bars to hold. Obstruct...
by Jeri
Fri Jan 27, 2006 12:17 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Aimless
Replies: 14
Views: 3058

Jeri

Hi, You will like it here Richey. The people here are very friendly and helpful. They are also very caring. Excellent excellent poets here. Deb, I thank you so much for allowing me to bend your ear. This is a problem that words just can't help anymore. Trust me I have tried. Just a big soap opera. I...
by Jeri
Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:44 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Aimless
Replies: 14
Views: 3058

Jeri

Hi guys, Thank you very much. I wrote this to enter a contest. It is a form called lento. This is my first time attempting this form. I hope it makes sense. Have ya'll heard of this? I have not but I thought I'd try. Hey Deborah and dreamtime, I haven't been here much lately or anywhere for that fac...
by Jeri
Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:34 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Aimless
Replies: 14
Views: 3058

Aimless

Blameless through the walk of life.
Shameless in the ways of night.
Nameless to the eyes that see.
Aimless leads her destiny.

Instructed, yet no bars to hold.
Inducted, but her dreams are sold.
Obstructed by the break of day
Abducted with no words to say.

Jeri Fittler
by Jeri
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:52 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Repair Me Doctor
Replies: 12
Views: 2388

Jeri

Hi dreamtime, Ya know I would love for all the parts to stand proud like they use to and the muscle tone still be tight and perky but hey I have better things to spend my hard earned money on, like BILLS !!!!!!!!!!! And if I had a choice of a tight ab or giving you food, then my friend you would hav...
by Jeri
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:44 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Date
Replies: 34
Views: 5888

Jeri

EXCELLENT write and advice Deb. Some men would do a tree or a jar of peanut butter. I'm sorry for that comment but girls need to be careful. Mothers need to be honest with their daughters. Let them know that trust in anyone doesn't mean carelessness or stupidity. I often wonder about numb parents. T...
by Jeri
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:32 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Homelessness (This Life)...(2005)
Replies: 15
Views: 3168

Hi rock,

This is a sad read. Excellent write.
God's touch
Jeri
by Jeri
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:30 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Cage Rage
Replies: 7
Views: 1732

Jeri

I like the way you feel your words. Excellent write!!
God's touch
Jeri
by Jeri
Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:28 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: lonely feathers
Replies: 2
Views: 1123

Jeri

Hi mikmok,
Very well written my friend. An outlook on death that is different. At least I think that is what you were going for. Interesting. I read this a few times to see if I could stay with you. So may I say job well done.
God's touch
Jeri